Information:
You need to put much more information on your igneous rock section. I would prefer it if you put 2 different sections about extrusive and intrusive rocks. I liked your sedimentary rock page, just be sure to explain the definition of some of the complicated words you typed.
Spelling:
I didn't see any mistakes on your spelling, excellent work!
Grammar:
Although most of your grammar was superb, I saw a mistake on the metamorphic rock page. You wrote "and by texture" twice. Also note having too many "and's" is not proper.
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Brian Robeson
1/4/2012 09:57:54 am
(Adding to previous post.)
Punctuation:
Your punctuation on your writing was all filled. Nice work.
Capitals:
You had the habit of capitalizing the first letter of a word that was on the title anywhere on the sentence, eg. "Few days later the lava cools down and it forms an Igneous Rock." Other than that nice job!
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Chelsea Somers
1/4/2012 11:26:18 am
Info: Excellent information! But on your Metamorphic Rocks page, you said "and by texture" twice.
Grammar: Good grammar! No mistakes.
Capitals: I didn't see any errors. :)
Punctuation: Great job!
Spelling: I didn't see any errors.
Media: You had very good and clear pictures.
Keep up the good works!
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chelsea somers
1/4/2012 11:26:34 am
I meant ' work'
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Sam fisher
1/4/2012 12:03:17 pm
Info: Good info but is it all in your own words. except you said and by texture twice.
Capitals: No capital mistakes
Punctuation:
No punctuation mistakes.
Media: nice pics but could you add a video?
Spelling no spelling mistakes
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Cole Mcgrath
1/4/2012 01:13:16 pm
info- Is good but I think it is not inyour own words
Capitals- no mistakes
Punctuation no mistakes
Media-good but add a video
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SpongeBob
1/4/2012 11:25:40 pm
Grammar:Your grammar is great.
Capitalization: You had no mistakes
Spelling: You had no mistakes
Information: Your info is good but not in your own words.
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