Nice job Mike! I saw some really good content on your different pages but I did see some errors. Errors like how when you said, "GPA" I'm not sure if everyone knows what that acronym stands for. Your content, even though it was plentiful, I did see words I don't think you might use to explain what the structure of the earth is. I saw a lot of those words especially on your mantle page. Other than that, good job!
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SpongeBob
12/15/2011 02:03:36 am
Crust
In the crust section your information isn't much it's just that your font size is large so I think you can do better. Please add like how thick it is what happens to it, does it stay the same forever and please add more transition words but great job keep it up.
Mantle
please make your words simpler so that anyone can understand it, please add information on the two layers that make up the mantle.
Outer-core
please add more information and add transition words
Inner-core
great job on the inner core but try and make the picture more clear.
Put the theory of plate tectonics page under the Earth's structure, but over all great job.
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Cole Mcrath
12/15/2011 12:35:02 pm
Your Crust page is very good but please put more infrmation and more about it and how wide it is and what it is made out of.
Your Mantle page is very well wirten and put easer words to understand and add more info.
Your Outer Core page is good but add more info
Your Inner Core page is lookin good I seen nothing wrong great job.
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